American Studies consists of one block of American Literature and one block of American History each day for a semester. Students use skills from both disciplines to complete three in depth projects, developing a more complete understanding of America's past, present, and future.
American history is the story of our nation’s past. In this course students use primary and secondary sources to explore selected themes that are woven into this story. American literature selections by key authors reflect such themes as civil rights, labor and social movements, industrial and technological change and the causes and consequences of war. Students receive English and Social Studies credit for this class.
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 10pt;"><span style="color: #000000;"><span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman';">American Studies<span> </span> <span> </span> <span> </span> <span> </span> Name _____________</span></span></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 150%; margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><strong><span style="line-height: 150%; color: #000000; font-size: 10pt;"><span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman';">Depth and Balance</span></span></strong></p>
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<li class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 150%; margin: 0in 0in 0pt; color: #000000;"><span style="line-height: 150%; font-size: 10pt;"><span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman';">The reflection showed in-depth and balanced consideration of both the student and historical timeline.</span></span></li>
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<li class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 150%; margin: 0in 0in 0pt; color: #000000;"><span style="line-height: 150%; font-size: 10pt;"><span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><span style="line-height: 150%; font-size: 10pt;"><span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman';">The reflection showed balanced consideration of both the student and historical timeline and reveals some effort to delve beyond surface facts.</span></span></span></span></li>
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<li class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 150%; margin: 0in 0in 0pt; color: #000000;"><span style="line-height: 150%; font-size: 10pt;"><span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman';">The reflection was not balanced between the student and historical timeline.</span></span></li>
<li class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 150%; margin: 0in 0in 0pt; color: #000000;"><span style="line-height: 150%; font-size: 10pt;"><span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman';">There was little depth to the reflection.</span></span></li>
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<li><span style="line-height: 150%; font-size: 10pt;"><span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman';">The reflection only considered one timeline.</span></span></li>
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<li class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 150%; margin: 0in 0in 0pt; color: #000000;"><span style="line-height: 150%; font-size: 10pt;"><span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman';">The reflection clearly addressed all required questions and includes relevant and ample examples from the timeline.</span></span></li>
<li class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 150%; margin: 0in 0in 0pt; color: #000000;"><span style="line-height: 150%; font-size: 10pt;"><span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman';">The reflection reveals substantial effort and careful analysis.</span></span></li>
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<li class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 150%; margin: 0in 0in 0pt; color: #000000;"><span style="line-height: 150%; font-size: 10pt;"><span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman';">The reflection addressed all required questions and includes some relevant examples from the timeline.</span></span></li>
<li class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 150%; margin: 0in 0in 0pt; color: #000000;"><span style="line-height: 150%; font-size: 10pt;"><span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman';">The reflection reveals some effort and analysis</span></span></li>
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<li class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 150%; margin: 0in 0in 0pt; color: #000000;"><span style="line-height: 150%; font-size: 10pt;"><span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman';">The reflection addressed only some required questions and does not include sufficient examples from the timeline.</span></span></li>
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<li class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 150%; margin: 0in 0in 0pt; color: #000000;"><span style="line-height: 150%; font-size: 10pt;"><span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman';">The reflection reveals little effort or analysis.</span></span></li>
<li class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 150%; margin: 0in 0in 0pt; color: #000000;"><span style="line-height: 150%; font-size: 10pt;"><span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman';">No supporting examples from the timeline were discussed.</span></span></li>
<li><span style="line-height: 150%; font-size: 10pt;"><span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman';">Most of the required questions were not addressed.</span></span></li>
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<li class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 150%; margin: 0in 0in 0pt; color: #000000;"><span style="line-height: 150%; font-size: 10pt;"><span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman';">There were no errors in grammar, spelling, punctuation or capitalization;</span></span></li>
<li class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 150%; margin: 0in 0in 0pt; color: #000000;"><span style="line-height: 150%; font-size: 10pt;"><span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman';">word choice used was effective and creative.</span></span></li>
<li class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 150%; margin: 0in 0in 0pt; color: #000000;"><span style="line-height: 150%; font-size: 10pt;"><span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman';">The paper was clearly organized.</span></span></li>
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<li class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 150%; margin: 0in 0in 0pt; color: #000000;"><span style="line-height: 150%; font-size: 10pt;"><span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman';">There were 1-3 errors in grammar, spelling, punctuation or capitalization;</span></span></li>
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<li class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 150%; margin: 0in 0in 0pt; color: #000000;"><span style="line-height: 150%; font-size: 10pt;"><span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman';">There were 4-6 errors in grammar, spelling, punctuation or capitalization;</span></span></li>
<li class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 150%; margin: 0in 0in 0pt; color: #000000;"><span style="line-height: 150%; font-size: 10pt;"><span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman';">word choice was usually effective, but the writing was a bit dry.</span></span></li>
<li class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 150%; margin: 0in 0in 0pt; color: #000000;"><span style="line-height: 150%; font-size: 10pt;"><span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman';">The organization was confusing at times.</span></span></li>
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<li class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 150%; margin: 0in 0in 0pt; color: #000000;"><span style="line-height: 150%; font-size: 10pt;"><span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><span> </span>word choice was often not effective and the writing lacked creativity.</span></span></li>
<li class="MsoNormal" style="line-height: 150%; margin: 0in 0in 0pt; color: #000000;"><span style="line-height: 150%; font-size: 10pt;"><span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman';">The paper was disorganized.</span></span></li>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 10pt;"><span style="color: #000000;"><span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman';">Total Points:____/30 pts. <span> </span> <span> </span> Grade: __________</span></span></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 10pt;"><span style="color: #000000;"><span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman';">See back for a reminder of the questions that must be addressed in this reflection.</span></span></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="color: #000000;"><span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><strong><span style="font-size: 10pt;">In a 300-600-word essay (1-2 double-spaced, typed pages) reflect on what you have learned by completing this timeline project</span></strong><span style="font-size: 10pt;">.</span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><em><span style="font-size: 10pt;"><span style="color: #000000;"><span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman';">In this reflection discuss answers to all of the following questions. Each question should be discussed in a separate paragraph.<span> </span> Use supporting examples from your timeline to back up conclusions.</span></span></span></em></p>
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<li>Explain the most surprising or interesting piece of knowledge you learned <span style="text-decoration: underline;">about yourself and about the world</span> while completing this project? Explain why you found these facts interesting/surprising.</li>
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<li>In what ways has this project affected your thinking about the following:</li>
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<li>your place in your family?</li>
<li>your place in the world?</li>
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<li>Historians often create a label to describe or characterize a specific time period in history. Based on what you have learned by doing this project, how would you characterize the late 1990's and 2000-2010 ? Give evidence from your timeline to support your characterization.</li>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 10pt;"><span style="color: #000000;"><span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman';">delete</span></span></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: center; margin: 0in 0in 0pt;" align="center"><span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><strong><span style="color: #ff0000; font-size: 10pt;">Rep</span></strong></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 10pt;"><span style="color: #000000;"><span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman';">unnecessary repetition</span></span></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 10pt;"><span style="color: #000000;"><span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman';">Switch words around</span></span></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: center; margin: 0in 0in 0pt;" align="center"><span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><strong><span style="color: #ff0000; font-size: 10pt;">R-O</span></strong></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 10pt;"><span style="color: #000000;"><span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman';">run-on sentence</span></span></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 10pt;"><span style="color: #000000;"><span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman';">close up this space</span></span></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: center; margin: 0in 0in 0pt;" align="center"><span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><strong><span style="color: #ff0000; font-size: 10pt;">Sp</span></strong></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 10pt;"><span style="color: #000000;"><span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman';">spelling error</span></span></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 10pt;"><span style="color: #000000;"><span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman';">a space needed here</span></span></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: center; margin: 0in 0in 0pt;" align="center"><span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><strong><span style="color: #ff0000; font-size: 10pt;">S/V</span></strong></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 10pt;"><span style="color: #000000;"><span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman';">subject/verb agreement</span></span></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 10pt;"><span style="color: #000000;"><span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman';">begin new paragraph</span></span></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: center; margin: 0in 0in 0pt;" align="center"><span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><strong><span style="color: #ff0000; font-size: 10pt;">T</span></strong></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 10pt;"><span style="color: #000000;"><span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman';">verb tense problem</span></span></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 10pt;"><span style="color: #000000;"><span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman';">no paragraph</span></span></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: center; margin: 0in 0in 0pt;" align="center"><span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><strong><span style="color: #ff0000; font-size: 10pt;">Wdy</span></strong></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 10pt;"><span style="color: #000000;"><span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman';">wordy</span></span></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><strong><span style="color: #ff0000; font-size: 10pt;">WC</span></strong></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 10pt;"><span style="color: #000000;"><span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><span> </span>Weak word choice</span></span></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: center; margin: 0in 0in 0pt;" align="center"><span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><strong><span style="color: #ff0000; font-size: 10pt;">WW</span></strong></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 10pt;"><span style="color: #000000;"><span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman';">wrong word</span></span></span></p>
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